| "Trapped" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Me On: August 11, 2004 22:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's great! Please update soon, I just can't wait to go on reading.
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Reviewed By: tatsugrl On: May 13, 2004 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have got to continue this story. It is beyond cute. Hopefully another chapter soon???
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: JackN [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 16:22 CST
Comment/Review:
I like WITCH WERE's idea kinda...cept for Omi joining in... its kind of sick. But to each there own ne? I'd like to see a second chapter please!! -Jack
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Reviewed By: shiroi hoshi On: February 08, 2004 07:54 CST
Comment/Review:
its ok...but kinda corny. the characters are sorta ooc
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Reviewed By: WITCHWERE [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 11:09 CST
Comment/Review:
You can't just leave it there! Actually I would kinda like it if Omi found Aya/ken in a comprimising situation and then joined in...Yeah twisted I know.... WITCH WERE
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Reviewed By: Hutaranka On: January 06, 2004 13:08 CST
Comment/Review:
it started good,but what now? hope you update soon.
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