| "Fox and Dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Sheik2711 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 10:16 CDT
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^_______^ YAY!!! You've updated!!! WEEEEEEEE!!! *gives her the dollar* BUAHAHAHAA!! Now, update soon! Pleez!! See ya! -Lyona*
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Reviewed By: BaconTomato (nli) On: July 18, 2004 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I liked this fic so far but I have one complaint. Your character seems to be leaning towards being a Mary Sue. I mean, she's a shapeshifting fire fox/dragon who can control black magic. That is a LOT of power. That's basically my only complaint, (no this is NOT, I repeat NOT a flame, you can take it as one if you want to.) I would ease down on the power. Like, make her a dragon demon thing who can control black magic. Not all of the above, she's just way too powerful and the story would be boring if she defeats everyone. (Hence the enjoyment factor rating) So anyway, keep updating, but bear what I said in mind! Ja! ^-^ -BT
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Title: SRY!!!
Reviewed By: moon(2lazy2signin) On: June 28, 2004 16:22 CDT
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im so sry i havent updated ive just been really buisy. to giv u sum gud news im almost done wiv the next chap. bad news is im going on vacation in july so ill update like the wind!! sry-moon
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Reviewed By: tolazytothinkofone On: June 04, 2004 16:48 CDT
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i really like ur fic and its really cool reading, i really hope u arent abandoning it! plz update if u arent just leaving it to rot, ILL DO ANYTHING!!!!!!
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Title: Dollar?
Reviewed By: _Luna_ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 19:19 CDT
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Dollar?? Where?? *Snifs Air* MUST FIND DOLLAR!!! sry about that last chapter. I probalby scared sum of u away with luna's chant. Hey wot can i say? I wrote the whole chapter around midnight...^^
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Reviewed By: Sheik2711 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 11:26 CDT
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O_o I'm going crazy! You have to update soon! Pleez!!?!? ^^ I'll give you a dollar if you do! *holds up a dollar* Update! See ya! -Lyona*
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Title: Thx
Reviewed By: _Luna_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 15:21 CST
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Thank you all for the great reviews! Im glad u like my fic. Thx! Ja Ne- Moon
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Title: =^-^=
Reviewed By: yuyuhakgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 09:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey ash!! Ive tried emailing you but it no work so i ask you here! You like your role in my fanfic??? Im puttin Jynx in it to cause she wants in tew!! well thats all i wanted to ask! Call me!
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Reviewed By: Sheik2711 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 19:47 CST
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Update soon! Or else..*pulls out frying pan* BUAHAHAHAHA!!! I hope you update soon! See ya! -Lyona*
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Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 00:51 CST
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update! ^-^
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Reviewed By: anime12 On: March 07, 2004 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!you stole my other nick name! well i forgive you i mean lots of peoples have luna as a nick name! oh you have a great story keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Baka Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 00:26 CST
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hehe your welcome ^___^ I've added this story to my faveorates so update soon!! I liked the chappie even if it was short ^_^'
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Reviewed By: Sheik2711 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 19:28 CST
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I just read the whole thing, and it's really good. Please update! Check out my fic too, it's called Lyona's Tournament!!! I just put up the first chapter yesterday, so if you wanna be in it leave a review there. Thanx! -Lyona
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Reviewed By: Baka Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 02:09 CST
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LOL I love this story! Luna is a wonderfull charecture ^_^ update soon!!!!
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