| "friends? or even more?" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: pisces_twins, Aqua On: October 16, 2004 22:21 CDT
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This is a cute fic! ^-^, although I have to admit that the spelling and grammar mistakes annoy me a lot I understand English not being your first language n' all. I went to a french school for 2 years, it was horrible, french grammar really is impossible!! Everytime you think you know all the verbs suddenly there are more!! it's soo annoying!!!!!!!!! Oh and are you in Montreal, I think that's what you said, well I have a friend in Montreal who is in a french school, there's probably no point in mentioning that o.o, but whatever ^-^. Anyway it better NOT be Hatori spying on them, no you wouldn't do that... would you? Anyway Hatori would NEVER do that so it's ok, I shouldn't have anything to worry about! ^-^ I don't really have any ideas for the punishment o.o, but please don't kill anyone!!!!! and i'm hoping that Kyo and Yuki can actualluy be together in the end!!!! That would make me insanely happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^-^ I know i'm wierd!!!! ^-^ ~Aqua~ (wow long review!)
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Reviewed By: Yonast On: September 27, 2004 16:47 CDT
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Wow! Cool story! I absolutely love it! Please, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Riyo-san On: September 26, 2004 16:21 CDT
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I love it! Continue please!
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Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 03:24 CDT
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Not bad.
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Reviewed By: shortcake middy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 20:50 CDT
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very cute so far. i approve. you might want to re read your chapters a bit, some of your typos are kinda funny (not that i can talk i type in font like 18 and still miss stuff) but on the chapter with the kiss, you typed that Kyo-kun was feeling everything in the first kiss, you put kyo felt his Thong and my first impression was 'what is Yuki-chan doing with a thong?!' but rereading it i guess you ment tounge, but it still gave me the giggles. ill be waiting for more! Ja ne
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Title: Uhhh
Reviewed By: Errr On: April 05, 2004 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok You have a very good fic here. I really like the idea and all (huge Kyo/Yuki fan) But you REALLY need to get a Beta for your fic. You have a lot spelling and grammer mistakes. It makes the story very difficult to read as the flow of the storyline is broken when every few words there is a misspelling or contextually incorrect word; or when you hit a sentance that just makes no sense. Especially since you capitalize a lot of the misspellings. fix up your spelling and grammer mistakes even just a little, and you'll have a terrific fic.
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Title: Flying on Broken Wings
Reviewed By: bakurafan88 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 00:09 CST
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I hope you write more soon. I really enjoyed reading what you have up so far. kyou/yuki is one of my favorite pairings, so keep up the good work. oh and concerning this ~*~Oh and by the way does anyone know a good place to dl anime??? Cuz my kazaa has lots of problem... ~*~ I use Soulseek. It's really good and you can im people on it. Plus it's quite fast with the downloads. go to soulseek.com to get it. Ja ne!
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Title: wildflowerz
Reviewed By: Wildfire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really cute I like it a lot you need to work on Gramer a bit but other than that I love it! Write more soon kay.. OHH and to all you people out there that don't review.. WHY NOT!? It helps people out review their storys.. this site has a great review thing and no one seems to use it. But any way I LOVE this story Kyou and Yuki are so cute is somthing going to happen to kyou or Yuki (hopefully Kyou) that makes the other revile their feelings? Wildfire
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Reviewed By: Kyria the fallen angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: crazy?or not?
Reviewed By: ssaannddrraa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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Men! you"re crazy you know that!!! Ok! you know me i'm you're friend,remember, so i'll tell you that : YOU'RE CRAZY!!! But you're story is awesome so continue you're good work beubye!!
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