Reviewed By: DarkGatomon, the Kuroneko Yajuu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 12:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Cute! Funny! It's not the best parody I've ever seen, although I'm not sure it's even supposed to be a true parody. On the other hand, its jokes were original, and that makes up for a lot of faults. The most specific problem I found was that it was a little hard to figure out who was playing whom -- mostly because I was baffled as to what Sango was doing. Having characters not enter the story straight off is fine -- in fact, good -- but she was so active on the sidelines that I kept searching for her part. Overall, though, it was funny and well-written! Some of the jokes still have me chuckling, such as the really hysterical end to chapter one. Although I would normally be against splitting dialogue so abruptly down the middle, that line does stand so fantastically as its own punchline that it worked really well. So good job on that, and all the other innovative stuff you did! Novelty is a great thing.
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