Reviewed By: Effortless On: January 07, 2004 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
not a bad start i liked the way you used a real animal for the new character, keep adding chapters, i think this could get good!
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