| "Onegai Bounty Hunter" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 16:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, PLEASE UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I recently fell in love with the Onegai series (both Teacher and Twins) and you write extremely well, so reading this fic is quite a pleasure. I just wish your updates were longer.
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really loving this so far. Please update it soon.
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Title: Nice work so far. Howabout an update?
Reviewed By: Cardcaptor_RLH85 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 04:24 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm really liking this story. Recently I've been trying to find favorite stories for different animé series that I've watched, and this is definately near the top of my Onegai Teacher list ^_^ However, I'm really hoping for an update...according to the info on the story the last update was August 29, 2004. That's nearly half a year now...I'd be infinately greatful to see how this one turns out. Thanks for the wonderful writing ^_^
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Title: Eagerly awaiting more
Reviewed By: Nemis On: August 09, 2004 21:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hobie, you're doing a great job, how about an update or two ? We are eagerly awaiting more of the story!!!
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Reviewed By: nonschool On: July 01, 2004 04:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
glad to read more of your story and the set up chapters? but looking forward to some action also. Who all knows of Kei's marriage?
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Title: Kudos on the update
Reviewed By: Nemis On: May 20, 2004 21:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for the short update, I am very interested in how you flesh out the story. Keep the updates coming, you may have something here!
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Reviewed By: nonschool On: May 13, 2004 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for updating and like the way your story is going. will there be a face to face soon? keep up the good work .
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Title: Two quick questions
Reviewed By: Kettu On: May 06, 2004 07:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story. As there a so very few Please Teacher stories on the net as is you get extra points for making it a good one. But I have just two questions about the first chapter. 1st: Why would knowing english help? Lake Kinazaki (Where its set) is in Japan. 2nd: Why didn't she just teleport Matagu inside the ship instead? Other then that this is proceeding well.
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Reviewed By: Nemis On: April 22, 2004 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like that someone has picked up and done some Fanfic on Please Teacher! This is an excellent story that can be explored in many areas I feel; if only I could write. :) Anyhow as of Chapter 2 I am hooked, keep them coming... I would like to see more after Chapter 4!
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Reviewed By: nonschool On: March 26, 2004 03:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
like how you mixed the old and the new elements to come up with a good fanfiction.Please teacher shouldn't be over looked just because it didn't last very long as a anime or a manga.
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Reviewed By: marnika On: January 23, 2004 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
looking forward to reading more of your story.Love please teacher and you would think with all the highschool fics' being witten for others this catogory would have plenty but their rare so thanks for putting one up.
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