| "Unwanted Desire" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: WHO KNOW'S On: April 16, 2006 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love this! I already read the 7th chapter on adultfanfiction.net but since its going slightly on the fritz I tried to find it here! I adding this to my favorites! P.S. In case you want to know Adultfanfiction.net is doing a lot better and its just a long time to download to each page
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Reviewed By: WHO KNOW'S On: April 16, 2006 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love this! I already read the 7th chapter on adultfanfiction.net but since its going slightly on the fritz I tried to find it here! I adding this to my favorites! P.S. In case you want to know Adultfanfiction.net is doing a lot better and its just a long time to download to each page
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 21:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Innocent_Assassin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 08:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWW! poor Omi! He`s one of my fav bishonen! *evil grin* I wanna hurt Bradley...hehehe...*sigh* too bad i can`t touch him though...Anyway, LOVE the fic!
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Title: more please...
Reviewed By: chorin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 08:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The more lemon it gets the better >=D. Omi's my favorite torture toy, I don't blame Shuldig and Crawford for being obsessed over Omi like that, more please XD Oh, and I love the kenXomi idea... hehe... kenXomi! FOREVER! XD
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Reviewed By: sadkitten On: June 08, 2004 18:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
please continue ths fanfic i like it a lot .I'm a huge omi fan so please continue
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 16:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, cant wiat for the next chapter! I have to admit Aya/Omi used to be my pairing of choice, and this almost makes me wasnt to go back!
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ack Poor omi! but very well written! i cant wait for the next chapter! you made me want to cry for Omi and Aya, wow, it was fantastic! Ashes
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 14:56 CST
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*offers a losenge for your throat* that evil laugh dose take a lot out of a person if ya dona practice it enuf...it's more like this *takes a deep breath and lets out a * MWAHHAAHAHAHA Mwahhahaha.. like that...any way *hugs* wecome back, lookin forward to next chap!
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Title: Update! Update!
Reviewed By: DivineAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 01:55 CST
Comment/Review:
what what!? Not in the mood for fanfiction and yet you leave all us readers on the edge of our seats like that!? Ok, that's just nod fair *Omi nods head in agreement* (things to self 'wanting to go home here') Please UPdate!! I don't think your charcters are totally OCC at all! IN fact I think Omi is very well done, and you've really just started to develop Aya's character so it's to early to really tell. It's a shame ff.net is rejecting this fic because it's really good. Here's looking forward to some updates!! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 20:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay Aya Chan *looks cutiously at what she just wrote and shrugs* dont let those evil swarz people get omi-chan again..
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Crimson Blood On: January 16, 2004 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O that was interesting....^_^ write more plz
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 17:15 CST
Comment/Review:
end??? me hope not....
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