| "Hikari no Itai" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Yuu Mei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 17:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
itai no hikari means pain's hikari (light..)... I think you meant hikari no itai...
|
Reviewed By: a-Leng [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This seems like quite a nice fic but I don't get what a hikari is and I don't know who Ryou is.
|
