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| "One Man" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Pandora_Marwell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 14:52 CST
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| Reviewed By: Pandora_Marwell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 14:51 CST
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I like this fic. Its good that you go over your Typos and keep it accurate. The reactions to the situation seem real enough, and believable if you can put aside Kenshin's vow in the first place. But I like it. Please keep writing.
| Reviewed By: silverdemon87 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done. You've really taken Kenshin's thoughts and put them into words. I'm sure that Kaoru, Yahiko, and Sano would try to comfort him first... In Chapter 2, Sano brought up the fact that the guy Kenshin killed was a anarchist... I know the Rooster Head can be a bit insensitive but... somehow, I don't think that he would approach the subject so callously. I believe you mentioned it in your fic... Anyways, I think (this is just my opinion) that maybe you can have some flashbacks to when Kenshin had killed that man so that we will get an idea of what happened, even though you briefly touched on it in Kaoru's POV... Wowies, I'm running a bit long so I'm just gonna stop right here. Oh and be sure to update! ^^
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