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Reviewed By: RaiMidori [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It would have been quite a bit better if you wrote the song in italics or bold, that way it would have been easier to differentiate between the song and the actual fanfic. Your vocabulary could be a bit better, but other than that, I think this fanfiction has a lot of feeling put into it.
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Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting how you kept the POV hidden until the end. I really hate Takuto, so if I had known it was him, I wouldn't have read it. But, since I had no idea and read it thinking it was her conscious, I really loved reading this. To find out it was Takuto's POV was shocking, but I sort of got a different feeling about him instead of the disgust I normally feel. So great job on getting me to sympathise with a character I don't care for. That took a lot of genius. Superb job.
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Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet! The whole flow was very intoxicating. The last lines completely set this apart from other Takuto/Mitsuki fics.
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Reviewed By: Jurei-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 00:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Too friggin cute!^^ I'm glad that someone's written a Mitsuki/Takuto fic...FINALLY...*basks in fic-ness* Keep it up!^^ Please write more...we need more of these on here!^^ *calls to arms* Ja! ~Jurei-chan^6
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