Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I can't spell, but I sure can spell, Crystal Toyko. And it's not spelt "Cristal Tokio". But now that I've gotten over that (deep breaths,...), I think you should keep writing. It's pretty good so far, and lose some of the bad puns, and the stupid words like "get jiggy wit it". That's out of style and use someting new or make up your own. Other than those things, keep writing it's pretty good. JA NE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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