| "Altered Destinies" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Awesome-O On: August 26, 2005 15:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
The sea duelist that you referred to, his Japanese name is Ryouta Kajiki, not Ryouji. (Otherwise, you might mistake him with Ryuuji Otogi yo. =P) Interesting story you have here.
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Title: Jounouchi's Name Yo
Reviewed By: The Almighty Piece of Spam On: August 01, 2005 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya! I just wanted to point out that I saw that you have Jounouchi's name backwards in this chapter. Jounouchi is the last name and Katsuya is his first name. Just wanted to point that out yo. PEACE!
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Reviewed By: Holla!!! On: March 07, 2004 02:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Coo'. I like it.
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Reviewed By: Purpulus On: March 04, 2004 12:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice to see what's been happening so far. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Rasheed's Twin Brother Twiced Removed On: February 29, 2004 02:04 CST
Comment/Review:
GOOD STORY! CONTINUE!
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Reviewed By: Blah Blah The Terrible On: February 24, 2004 03:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting story. But one complaint: Mai is supposed to be 24 years old, according to Kazuki Takahashi's character book. So she's not in her late teens.
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Reviewed By: Purpulus On: February 24, 2004 03:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting story. Do continue.
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