| "YUGIOH SLUMBER PARTY" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Sniff...
Reviewed By: Callie1075 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 08:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You mean... the END? Of the whole thing! How absurd! *shoots you a dirty look* You simply MUST continue! Anyway... the duel should've had humor sprinkled through out it, or something. Um... RR my fics please! ^_^;;;;; Don't take the rating personally, I just can never get into dueling chappies...
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Title: Paige
Reviewed By: Callie1075 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Need more info on Paige... a lot more info... however, this chapter was very entertaining. ^^
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Title: Poor Yug'! Awwwww! ;_;
Reviewed By: Callie1075 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 08:04 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
Poor Yugi! Oh, and "Berkera" is spelled "Bakura", just so you know. *gives Yugi a hug for support* Hang in there, champ!
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Title: Kamehamedon't?
Reviewed By: Callie1075 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 07:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
You could've added more funny detail, and it was kind of short... plus, I didn't like the way you put DBZ characters without indicating that there was, in fact, DBZ in this fic. But anyway, what do I know? I like it, despite what this may cause you to believe. Not very original, though, but hey, EVERYBODY has to write at least ONE slumber party fic. It's like, a LAW! ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
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Title: Yamia
Reviewed By: Yamia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is funny!!!!but still,i wonder what Yami was doing eating underware....*glares at cowering older brother*anyway this fanfic was really good and funny!!!!
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Title: Funny!!
Reviewed By: Yamifanner(not logged in) On: July 13, 2004 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was funny and excellent fic. I was wondering if I can join your story and be paired with Yami. Pretty please? *puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: shadow_kazul [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who asked you Internet Girl! *mallet appears in hand* I have made a notch in this thing for every person i whack! how about being number 35! *whacks her over head twice* make that 37. MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *cough*
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Reviewed By: Internet girl On: April 24, 2004 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hated it . it was dumb
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Title: Cassia's friend CrystalRaven44
Reviewed By: CrystalRaven44 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good. i'm still laughing. My dad thinks i'm going crazy. Tell Cassia i said hi. I'm cheyenne by the way
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Reviewed By: KazeShinai On: March 09, 2004 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I 've rated you fanfic the way i did overall b/c it was funny, but your spelling..well sorry to say...sucks... Your grammar..*disregards grammar b/c it's a humor fic* anyways... funny fic.. but you should write things in paragraphs not in she said: he said: format.. That's bad formatting.. but again. Funny fic. Owari
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Title: Very Funny
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis was really funny. please continue
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