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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story! You really caught the spirit of Fake in the progression of Dee and Ryo's relationship. I've just started the Fake manga and this story was sooo in keeping with the story. Loved the use of Pam (LOL) and now you're really cooking!
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr (Not signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a fantastic story! So well written and you take all the elements of the manga into account. And HOT, oh baby!! Please write more.
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Reviewed By: ourmutualfiend [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 17:57 CDT
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This is terrific- strong characterization, believable set-up, and totally hot. Write more!
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Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! Great story! Happy that Ryo and Dee got together! Excellent job!!
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Reviewed By: shadowbrat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WAAAAIIIII!!! That was good! I abosolutly loved it to peices. YAAAY! * does happy dance* I wish I could write Fake! * sniffles* Oh well, you do a better job than I would have done if I tried. But anyways, BRAVO!!
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Reviewed By: Icewind [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 22:26 CST
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This was a great read. Plot and characterization fit very well. The lemon scene in the end was an added bonus. Nice work. =)
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Title: Lovely
Reviewed By: Calico Avangi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How adorable! There are a lot of Dee/Ryo Get-together fics out there, but you manage to make this one original and enjoyable. An extremely hot and well-written lemon added to that makes it a near perfect story. Very nice.
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this. I like the equality of the relationship. The details, the emotion, the plot. You've handled everything well here. This is a great short story.
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