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Title: LandraBlaze
Reviewed By: LandraBlaze [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked how you can portray the characters appropriately in the scenes in your fics, without making them seem OOC. Good job!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 08:34 CST
Comment/Review:
coolz! lol a bit ooc, but its okay!
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: Crazy_Green [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was funny great job. wow i think that was one of the best stories i've read in a long time keep up the great work!
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Title: So true
Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story too. How true is it that we some times dream about Anime Characters from time to time. I know I do and Sess is so hot why not. Well I loved it and keep it coming. I mean the work. Right... ^_~
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Reviewed By: HeavenlyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 14:45 CDT
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Quote: "Please sit down Inu..this is going to take some explaining and I dont want to explain it twice." she half demanded half begged. He saw the serious look in her eyes and he couldnt help it. He would do anything for her. So he sat, and he listened, and wanted to strangle the woman he loved more than anything. *********************** It was a good story, and very interesting idea, but... in the above quote Kagome said "sit" and Inu didn't face-fault into the dirt!!!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 *n.s.i.* On: March 20, 2004 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ADORABLE!!!! Oh MY Gosh! This was sooooooooooo kawaii! She was dreaming about a fictional character...I love that. I mean, I have cut, fluffy, waffy dreams about like Inu and Sesshy, but nothing hentaish or other than childish waff dreams. soooo, this was BEAutiful! LOVE it! more stories like this are needed, Mija! you are a wonderful authoress! please write more soon! Sly
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Title: i loooooove it
Reviewed By: Grining Idoit On: March 06, 2004 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE TTTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SSSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww how cool
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Reviewed By: Mysterious AM On: February 13, 2004 09:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, that was funny! And steamy of course, lol...but I got a huge laugh out of the whole plot. After all, Kagome is no worse than we are, is she? ^^;; I think I'd die if something like that happened to me. Thankfully I don't talk in my sleep, and I don't have dreams about chracters (except for one time when I had a dream that Sesshoumaru turned my brother into a monkey) I have strange, strange dreams...
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Reviewed By: Bobcat Lady On: February 07, 2004 03:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If there was ever a great lemon story, you made it. I only wished I was Kagome and InuYasha loved me like that. Congrats on the best lemon Inu/Ka I have ever seen. Thanks
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 22:16 CST
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This is a crazy story! Then end was so sad though. Well, not really like cry sad? But painful sad. And I gues it wasn't really the "end" either. I felt so embarrased for Kagome too about the Hiei thing. Thats terrible. The lemon was very nicly written to. I look forward to reading more stuff you've written ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 06, 2004 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
In a way I am almost sad there is going to be a lemon. This has been such an excellent tale so far, far more introspective than would have been thought at first, not sure how a lemon will effect it. Have to say the both the first part, as you showed us the inner workings of Inuyasha's mind and the last where he realises his mistake were excellent. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: IDEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: grinning idoit! On: February 06, 2004 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS A GOOOOD LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (I got hot just reading it) I have an idea for you.... you should make an epilogue and you should make it a SUPER LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Obsession!
Reviewed By: Deanna/Angel On: February 06, 2004 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FREAKY!!! it was very very good ...but what happens when Kouga finds out? ..and what about back where the others r ? ************Deanna P.S. hope this gets u thinkin'^_^
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 11:47 CST
Comment/Review:
coolie!! I luved it... partially cuz of da lemon but I also luv ur style of writing. I think i've read like all ur fics I just gota review them hehe...
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