| "Undying" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Nyght Silverstream [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 12:19 CDT
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Please write more of this story!! It is amazingly good, and the only real thing that I have any problem with is typos (but that is forgivable). I think you did a great job portraying Yuki (coming from someone who has a tendency to be compared to him on numerous occasions). As I said, please write more.
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 08:40 CST
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I like the emotions in this fic, and I am very curious to see where you take this. I'm glad that Shuichi was able to walk away. So many people write him as weak, but he's not.
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Title: Oh WOW
Reviewed By: L_N [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're writing the Tohma-Eiri-Shuichi triangle i could only dream of writing. This is incredibe stuff! I just happene dto find it in the gravi listing! And am so happy i did! I feel so terrible fo rShiuchi- coul dkill Tohma and Yuki both. And Mika! The psychology is incredible. I am so blown away. *WOW*
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 19:48 CST
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OK, I take back what I said earlier about feeling guilty about how I felt about Tohma. I'm going back to my original perception that he's exploiting his power. What a total jerk he is to schedule that tour! And Yuki can join that jerk club - it doesn't matter what he feels or thinks; if he isn't going to tell Shuichi, he might as well just hate the poor kid. It broke my heart - all the chances Shuichi to Yuki before he left. He really deserves better if Yuki can't pull his head out of his ass...
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Reviewed By: Inori Sakura On: March 22, 2004 15:26 CST
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Mou.... that was sad!! *sniff* Please update soon with more! I can't wait to read more! ^^;; BTW- just to try and nudge you to do what I want (ha ha ha! I'm the eviiil Kumagurou! see me roar! *grrr*) make it end ShuXYuki! We need kawaii ai des! ^-^ Love your fic! Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Hitomi_chan2 On: March 07, 2004 06:18 CST
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Sugoi! Sooo amazing! Please update soon! Anoo.. little question; is it a ThomaXYuki fic? I mean, I know you wrote it was ShuXYuki, but it looks like it's goning to turn out as YukiXThoma.. please don't make it like that! *cries* I love Shu-chan and Yuki.. *sniff* I love your fic! More more! Fukaku!! ^.^ Ja ne! ^^
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Title: WAIIIII!
Reviewed By: Krisnkriss@hotmail.com On: March 02, 2004 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic! Thanks for letting me know you updated! This is SUCH a good fic; really incredible. Poor Tohma! Is he ever going to tell Mika and Eiri about how he feels? Hey, if I was Mika....well, they are both bishounens after all, and....~blushes~ Yeah, but I'm sure that would never really happen...or would it? And then there's Shu-chan to consider, but that would just be too insane...and is it just me or does Hiro really seem to like Shu-chan? That would be one busy, gutter-esque story...too many pairings, lol! ;-) Throw a little K and Sakano, and some Noriko, Ryuichi, Tatsuha and Suguru in there and you'd have the whole group boinking like bunnies! Damn, this has to be the most pointless rambling review ever. Here is your novel of a review, lol. Honetly, great fic. Please continue as soon as you can! Kriss
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Title: Undying
Reviewed By: krisnkriss@hotmail.com On: February 12, 2004 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your take on the whole Tohma thing! Yes, you can notice hints of it in the manga, but you have rendered it with such power. I actually had tears in my eyes by the end. If you wouldn't mind, please, please email me when you have updated!!!! Thanks! Great fic! Keep it coming!!!! Kriss
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Title: Typical Brilliance...
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the concept of this fic, Lynn! It's something that we're all privy to if we've seen the anime or read the manga. I know you'll give us something that will make us step back and think about the situation from a different viewpoint. I've never felt sorry for Tohma because he doesn't want to honor Yuki and Shuichi's relationship. I feel that he's just exploiting his power. I feel guilty now... : (
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