| "We Belong To Each Other" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 18:24 CST
Comment/Review:
This was really good. You should continue this. There really aren't enough Ryoma and Sakuno fics. I have to sift through a bunch of PoT Yaoi to find them.
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: September 11, 2005 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story you should continue it. There is such a lack of good Ryo/Sak stories. So please write some more.
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Reviewed By: WhiteEternity On: March 24, 2004 09:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it! you should continue more of it!!
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Title: correction to first review
Reviewed By: Laradia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing style, and i think your "command of english" is just fine. At first i gave "enjoyment factor" an 8 because i was constantly aware of the fact that the charas are only 12 years old, and this story has Ryoma saying & doing things that i consider inappropriate for one so young. Then i looked again and realised that you have them both 17 in your story, so...another 10. You have a wonderful way of phrasing things, and an excellent sense of how to capture emotion in your words. Very good stuff, please continue with your writing :-)
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Reviewed By: Laradia On: March 22, 2004 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing style, and i think your "command of english" is just fine. The only reason i had to give "enjoyment factor" an 8 is because i was constantly aware of the fact that Ryoma is supposed to be only 12 years old, and this story has him saying & doing things that i consider inappropriate for one so young. This interfered in my being able to enjoy it fully; if this were a story about older teens, i would have graded the enjoyment factor a 10 as well. You have a wonderful way of phrasing things, and an excellent sense of how to capture emotion in your words. Very good stuff, please continue with your writing :-)
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