| "Plum Blossoms" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Laradia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. You write beautifully--the only thing wrong with this is that it ended too soon. The ending line summed up how i felt myself after reading this, and i'd never even considered anything like that before--which is proof of your ability to create emotional impact with your words. I know you intended this as a "one-shot" but i will hope for a sequel anyway ~_^
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Reviewed By: Jenny-fer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 23:17 CST
Comment/Review:
*squeel* That was so cute! Poor Oishi... and Kikumaru... *sniffs* One sided luvs always get to me.. Very nice!! ^^
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