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"Taishi's Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 116 ]
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 Reviewed By: NeoYami(Too dead to sign in)  On: March 07, 2004 13:40 CST
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Duuude!! Tashi's back? I knew it!! It wouldn't be Tashi's Betrayal without him again!! ^^ Write soon, soon sooooon!!!! And why did he take my Zero?! ..I mean...Zero...forget what I said...^^;
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 07, 2004 10:55 CST
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Ooh, cut Kakarot's hair...Gewd idea, I'll put it in Realm of INSANITY! ^-^ See, maybe you should try writing fics! *pushes Black B. closer to keyboard* Mmm...brookie... but is it square or round? 6_6 w/e. :po yum. Black B: ;_; Fine here's half. Black B.: ^___^ *Baku steals it and runs away* HEY! Get back here! *chases Baku* T_T ...Oie.
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 07, 2004 10:13 CST
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I feel lurved again! ^-^
 Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin  On: March 06, 2004 21:36 CST
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I wanna Brookie too! *steals RW's* BWUAHAHAHAH-! *is hit* X_X Sorry... Yay! It's nearly done! Wonderful, wonderful! Poor Baku... ;-; I'd be touche too if that scar was from Kibaomaru... and that... other thing... this is a bad situation to use this phrase, isn't it? *coughs* Ahem... I always seems to embarrass myself when commenting other people's fic's. >_< Whyyy?? Because you guys are very good at writing, that's why! ^^ I have no clue how that relates, but it does. And oh... duct tape can hold Baku? AND fix Vegita's antisocialness? *bows to duct tape* My new hero! Let's see if you can get Goku to freakin' cut his hair now... *advances while looking evil*
 Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan  On: March 06, 2004 21:08 CST
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So much for the idea of it being like the anime movie "Akira." Glad you updated! To congradulate you I'll give you my slingshot Steve! ((Oh no you don't! I'm not gonna let you sell me to this other freak!)) *Sigh* Fine, I'll give you this brookie I found in the store today instead. It's a half brownie and half cookie if you're asking. You did this in six pages during a full moon? Not bad. But "when did you finish it" is the true question.
 Reviewed By: Green Devil [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 06, 2004 19:58 CST
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Aww, poor Baku. Don't worry little one, everything will be alright... right? o_O This is a great fic! Hope you write more soon! ^_^!
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 06, 2004 18:53 CST
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I finished! I can't believe I just wrote 6 pages straight out of rfree will...
 Reviewed By: NeoYami (2lazy 2 sign in x.x)  On: March 06, 2004 18:27 CST
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Baku's very touche...but I dun blame him. ^^; Write more soon
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 04, 2004 13:32 CST
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LOL Black B Kirin! Naw, Ybaso wouldn't do that...I think I'm portraying the wrong image to you people. -.-; Whoops. Next chappie soon I promise!! Duct tape probably would hold Baku. I mean, duct tape can fix Vegeta's attitude problem! XD I am doing it in Baku POV, I just wanted to see if I should continue...Which I am. ^-^
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 04, 2004 13:27 CST
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...I probably won't put up the conversation because I'm 2 lazy! X.x
 Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin  On: March 03, 2004 20:36 CST
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Agree agree! Baku's view would be greatly appreciated. I have yet to read a fic from his POV... it outta be good! ^^ I'd also like to know what happened between Ybaso and Baku. Lemme guess... Ybaso tied him up and taped his mouth shut! :D What? It's worth a try... I think. Anyways, keep it up! It's great so far!
 Reviewed By: Green Devil (don't feel like loging in -_-)  On: March 03, 2004 19:04 CST
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I'd like to know what happened with Baku and Ybaso in the room and I think you should a) continue in Baku POV. Yeah... Ybaso and Baku are real funny when they're together! But in a way, I feel kind of sorry for Baku, though it's his own fault that he has to get draged back to his room. Lol! Anyway, great fic! Hope you write more soon! ^_^!
 Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan  On: March 03, 2004 18:39 CST
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>.< Eh, gomen nesai RW, I've been spending WAY too much time with people I REALLY hate at school against my will. Ashley most of the time. I don't think Goldfish crackers are that evil, just the stupid song on TV. That and friendship speeches. Can you make the whole thing in Baku's POV? *shrugs* It just seems interisting to me.
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 03, 2004 17:10 CST
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Do you I hafta review myself everytime I want to read everyonme else's reviews?! >_
 Title: yay *celebrates*
Reviewed By: NeoYami (2lazy 2 sign in x.x)  On: March 03, 2004 17:07 CST
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U updated again! This is truely an accomplishment! ^_^ Okay, I'd say a Baku POV and yes, I wanna know about that!!! ^^ write mooore soooooon!
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