|"Taishi's Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 116 ]|
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| Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 20:54 CST|
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
YAY!! I FINALLY finished reading it! All throughout today, I was like, "Crystal, you're going to get your butt into that chair and read this fic!" And I did! Such a WONDERFUL piece of fanfiction! This HAS to be your best! Ybaso is probably the best gundam OC character I've ever read about. I love how he and Baku were fighting in Ch. 9. XD Pure humor right there! Heh, and even thought the DA trio didn't appear much, it was still nice to see them involved in the fic! So, Grappler Gouf is now the commander? I'm adding this story to my favorites! I would read the sequal, but I can't read the kind of mature content you were saying about your sequal. X..o Curse over-protective parents... But, this fic was wonderful none-the-less!
| Reviewed By: GundamCat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 19:00 CDT|
ohh that was great!..and good use of the song..i luv that song..was gonna use it in one of my..glad i didn't^^..this was great^^
| Reviewed By: FeatherDragon On: January 25, 2005 21:14 CST|
Tashi dies. Poor Baku. he was such a good big bro to him. Great story.
| Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC ~not logged on~ On: January 19, 2005 07:38 CST|
Awwww. Great ending! I loved the song. Very fitting! This sounds like things are gonna heat up in the next fic. O__o Oh, scary thought! -lol-
| Reviewed By: RW On: January 18, 2005 18:22 CST|
RW: Naw, gotta have some mush in there. ^^;; But don't worry, I say there's twice as much torture and schemeing in Yabureru Mapputatsu. ^__^ *laughs evilly* Kiba: *laughs evilly with RW* RW: O.o; Don't do that, it's creepy...
| Reviewed By: Green Devil (don't feel like loging in -_-) On: January 18, 2005 18:18 CST|
... Taishi... died? Aww, but he was such a good big brother to Baku, not killing him and all. Poor Taishi. That was a great chapter! Now Zero shall comfort Baku and everything'll be fine, right? Or is something else being schemed in your head right now? Heh. I personally hope for the second. Anyway, great fic! I love it! ^_^!
| Reviewed By: RW On: September 21, 2004 15:28 CDT|
hahahaha gomenasi!! ;p Can't help you there!! ^-^ But I do have good news (or bad news to me) about this fic that'll be announced in CELEBRATE, so look for that new chapter! ^~
| Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 20:56 CDT|
GRRR! Darn I almost learned what was coming up DARN! LOL Now I'm wanting the rest RIGHT NOW!
| Reviewed By: RW On: September 11, 2004 10:40 CDT|
Yup yup DE. The only difference is...9.9; Well, you'll see. :p Teeheeheehahahahaha!!! XD I'm so bad...
| Reviewed By: RW On: September 11, 2004 10:31 CDT|
| Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 18:02 CDT|
Poor Zero he alway misses the good stuff ~tear~ Oh well his loss. right??? Tashi vs. Baku and Zeron vs. Zero for are fictions next chapters oddly enough. How cool is that?
| Reviewed By: RW On: September 07, 2004 14:42 CDT|
Maybe he will, maybe he won't. ^_^ All I'll say is Zero's gonna miss all the action. ;p Yup, I shall.
| Reviewed By: Green Devil (don't feel like loging in -_-) On: September 06, 2004 10:16 CDT|
Baku lives and he's gonna kick Taishi's ass!... Right? Well, I hope he does. Poor Baku. He's been through so much lately and has felt all left out. Damnit Zero! Get your ass over there and tell him how much you love him already! Well, hope you write more soon RW! Great fic! I love it! ^_^!
| Reviewed By: Green Devil (don't feel like loging in -_-) On: July 26, 2004 22:08 CDT|
Awww! Chibi Baku is just so cute! Hey, no fair! I updated a real chapter and you only put up this? Oh well, it was cute. I do hope that you get that chibi Baku in Ark fic written soon. It sounds like Baku was a bad little gundam back then. Lol. Well, hope you get that real chap out soon! Great fic! ^_^!
| Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 19:33 CDT|
Hehehe.....I win!^-^ No one else updates anymore. ~sigh~ oh well I haven't in a while either so no talking Lor!!
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