| "The Power of One : The Continuation" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Emmanuel Jones On: September 03, 2004 15:20 CDT
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Hey there. I read your story and I thought it was good. I watched "Pokémon the Movie 2000" and I think I can help you with the names. Melody's older sister is named Carol. For spelling errors Jiraldan is suppose to be Gelardan and Giovanni instead of Geovanni. Keep going with your fic, and if you need any help, e-mail me at EJONES914@aol.com. If you see this message, you can e-mail me now or anytime and the subject is your story title so I would notice. Bye for now!
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Reviewed By: flygirl 13 (not signed in) On: June 17, 2004 20:37 CDT
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great job i really luv it plz plz plz continue it i am really interested in it it is soooo funny and sweet
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Reviewed By: gladdecease (too lazy to sign in) On: June 11, 2004 13:56 CDT
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Well, that was an amusing chapter! Only one thing doesn't seem to make sense...why would Ash leave the Orange League half-way through? He didn't beat Lance and one or two of the 'Orange Crew' until after Shamuti, you know. Later!
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven On: June 02, 2004 21:01 CDT
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up date soon i really like this fict, and its been over a month
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