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| "Aishiteru" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, that was truely really sweet! I have a HonTogi death fic XD its not that great, only one review -_- there aren't enough of them out there! Anyway you did a GREAT job!!!
| Reviewed By: DirtyD On: February 26, 2004 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
;) That was so cute. Gawd that was frickin' cute. I bet your a dentist and this was all some plot to infect teeth with sweet fluff forcing poeple who read this story to have hundreds of dollars of work done. . . . Maybe not. -_- All was good in the fic but I was thinking. In that peom you wrote (that also had the ability to infect teeth) the one part 'I didn't know what it was, but I knew it was you' doesn't sound right. 'I didn't know what it was, but I knew it was from you' sounds better. Who knows, maybe you had just left out from in the peom. It happens to me. -_- I so don't try to write peotry. Great couple! TrisxDuke! Cute story, almost as cute as Yugi! Almost.
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