| "Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: flygirl 13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 00:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was getting really good i am enjoying it plz continue soon and maybe you can write longer chapters plz and update
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Title: MORE!
Reviewed By: frozen_in_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 11:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TOTALLY AWSOME!!!!!
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Title: more soon plz
Reviewed By: bigmanlittlebrain [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 20:58 CST
Comment/Review:
greetings author culd u plz write more soon it's really annoying seeing this not even finished story tho most r this 1 is 2 short. so plz hurry up with the updates.
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Reviewed By: Jess Scefing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great! Just... really really short... You don\'t have to end a chapter on a cliff hanger, in fact those tend to get annoying so just write until you feel it would be a good end. But anyway, I would like to see more.
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