| "A Tale of Two Larka" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: wing_hai (not logged in) On: July 04, 2005 02:20 CDT
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Well? Keep going!...Please?
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 13:12 CDT
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please up date soon
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 23:24 CDT
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please write again soon
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Reviewed By: o0ShadowXFox0o [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 19:49 CDT
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You gotta continue this soon. I wanna know what happens and who Miroku has on the bus with him. lol :) You've got a talent with words. Someday it will get you somewhere. Good luck with the story and may God bless you in your future exploits.
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Reviewed By: Kiogo(or ceydie) On: May 27, 2004 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool cool cool. so when will you update,wait i sound desperit,so update soon its really good,too. i just love to read stories even the cerative ones. weeellll bye bye. kiogo
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 17:22 CDT
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this sounds really interesting keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever not logged in.... On: May 09, 2004 21:00 CDT
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Loved it!!!!! Update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: chickenlover2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 03:00 CST
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I LOVE IT! u kno untraditional and stuff, prophecies r cool i wrote one for one of my stories too. except its really just a poem i thought of earlier and anyways im sure u dont wanna hear any more so ill shuttup while i can. SPAZZTIC BUTT CHICKENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 19:04 CST
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Very interesting! Yea make the chapters longer, but the profhecy was wonderful. and that cool little thing about how the future will continue yet words are lost... COOL. Well i definatly want you to continue. Sure i wouldn't mind a lil bit of mor/san but i want Shessho! SHESSHO but then he would have to be a LArka and that would be different then wat your telling us sooo AHHH my head hurts... just update O_O
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Reviewed By: Vic_18 On: February 19, 2004 15:52 CST
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I like it but there is room for improvement. Try and make the chapters longer and ful of detail, I love chaps like that :) Besides that its going pretty good. It seems intresting so...Update soon! :)
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