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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 23:22 CDT
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I say she should move in with him!!!!!!! And Rin should move in with Sesshy!!!!! I don't think Miroku is mature enough to handle it though, so maybe they should wait. Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 22:29 CDT
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Even if this chapter has not been edited, I believe it is in pretty good shape still. Good chapter, I enjoyed it ^^; Update soon, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 18:34 CDT
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great chapter!! Inu Kag and Shippo all together? It got the be the cutest thing. Mothers are evil arent they? grrr....Something must be serioously wrong with my computer because i can only see up to chapter 22...and that was posted like 2 weeks ago! I hope it doesnt screw the rest of my pc up *cries anime style* I hope you can update soon tho lol
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*bounces around* i liiiiike it lots, yey! maybe you should give your puppy for being a slave, hehehe.
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Reviewed By: Inu addict [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it rocks. i think its great!!!!
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: April 11, 2004 20:26 CDT
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Oh yay no more sickness!!!! *happy dance* this was a great chapter. The end was really funny. I've had that happen to me and it's simply infuriating lol. Can't wait 'till Tuesday ^__^
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Reviewed By: whitmangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an amazing story. I would luv to see Inuyasha as a cowboy. With a hat, tight jeans, a nuttin but a vest
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 08:16 CDT
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I still don't under stand how Rin got older than Kagome and how Sesshoumaru is only one year older than Inuyasha, but hey not my story. Update.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 05:19 CDT
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ooo that was a good chappie please keep up the good work and update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 04:08 CDT
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Thanks for posting the stats again. I forgot you posted them... probably would have helped if I knew that! ^^ Haha, and I laughed when I read (for Kouga) 'Personality: dense' XD Anyway, about the fact that this chapter was not edited, it was really good. I didn't see any mistakes, probably because I'm too cold to notice. Only thing was, at the beginning (one of the first few lines) you skipped what Inuyasha said... I'm guessing he asked 'Do you?' as in asking if she had anything planned for the day. Hn, hope I made sense. Good chapter and good luck! :D
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Title: Sesshoumaru lost?!?
Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't think that Sesshoumaru would lose too. Him of all people I figured would have held out to the end just because he was Sess! I would like to see him in a playboy bunny outfit. Him and Inuyasha would look so good. I am I sick or what? They are not real for crying out loud. But you have to admit they are just too damn sexy!!!!
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Title: ugh! REALLY stupid mm
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 15:06 CDT
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Super great chapter again. They really are a cute fmaily. InuYasha is a realy weirdo at time tho lol...matching bra and panties, thats funny.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 05:54 CDT
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lol Married.. that's funny. Shippo's soo cute. seems a little too innocent for his own good...lol well keep up the good work..sory brain freeze and my eyes twitching but update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Zero Saotome On: April 07, 2004 01:07 CDT
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Aww, kawaii chapter. Poor Shippo wants parents so bad. :turns into a little fox kitsune and walks up to Inuyasha and Kagome: Will you to please marry eachother?
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 21:37 CDT
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I won't go into mommy mode but get better soon!!! I think they should get married too!!!!!!
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