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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 01:42 CST
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Great chapter! I wonder what will happen with Hojo... hmm, the possibilities are endless XD Please, don't make a sequel to Running From The Past because I liked how it ended up :( I dunno even if there could even be a good plot for it...
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo how cute. i can't wait till i can read more. Keep up the good work and i'll be waiting!!! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Zero Saotome On: March 30, 2004 00:56 CST
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Good chapter and I can't wait to read more. :is happy Shippo came too: It sucks that your pc died and that you got into trouble. Hope things look up for you soon!
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Title: chapter 22
Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
actually that chapter wasnt boring : ) it's good because then you won't have to explain a whole buncha crap later :P anyways...you kinda mixed something up at the end of that chapter. lolz you said somethin like "wheres shippo going to sleep?" and got a response as "He'll probably share a room with shippo" ....im sure you meant Souta hehehehe!!! well i hope you're not in TOO much trouble for whatever it is you did LOL
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 17:54 CST
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God, when was the last time I checked this story for updates?! Great chapter, but I never thought Kagome's JII-CHAN could be portrayed as a bad guy! Anywayz, update soon!
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Title: hi almighty elena
Reviewed By: john boy On: March 29, 2004 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is awesome and hi to Ai Inu Koi and the almighty elena who's review is below mine cuz i kno her
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Reviewed By: The Almighty Elena On: March 29, 2004 15:25 CST
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moooore!update shoon!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 15:22 CST
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aww not trouble, thats shitty. well the chapter was great. It's good that Inu gets to knoer Kags family...I hope her grampa doesnt show up, that could be really awful. Good luck and I cant wait for the next update
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: March 29, 2004 06:17 CST
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will her grandpa show up while she's there? great chapter!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 06:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter :) I hope you're not in a lot of trouble!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 11:25 CST
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That was soo weird, I was thinking about Miroku making them wear cat suits half way through the chpter and then he did make them wear them!!!!!!!! Can you read minds??? Well good chapters but if you start bending spoons I'm outta here!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 04:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I real like read this story. I hope you up date so.
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice job on the last few chapters! ^.^ update soon
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Reviewed By: The Almighty Elena On: March 27, 2004 21:59 CST
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MORE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: March 27, 2004 21:15 CST
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Poor Inu Yasha, can't catch a break.lol It wouls be interesting to see him at Kagome's house with her mother...and there's always that possibility of gramp coming home which would be awful. I cant wait for the next update ^__^.
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