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| "Dark Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: kokosada [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 14:26 CDT
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Write more! OMG, you've gotta write more! Bakura don't let Ryou die>.< And you too! If you let Ryou die, I'll kill you myself, so... continue, onegai. ^^;;
| Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 11:01 CDT
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don't kill Ryou, you're gonna need him when you are going too update this story *holds up gun* cuz you will do that...right? It was very good written, the he's and him's were a bit annoying, but not confusing
| Reviewed By: silver kitsune princess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 19:35 CST
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pwease comtinue, and....don't kill ryou, he's like, too cute to be ... gone, oh, i loved it, so thatssssss why you should continue
| Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 13:08 CST
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that is way different and you are a very good writer. You should definately continue.
| Reviewed By: Ceribi Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 18:26 CDT
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... I... wow. I just... Ra, I can't even type that was so powerful!!! Really... that was strong. And I didn't find it confusing at all, just... wow. Er, sorry, but I'm in shock, so don't mind me.
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Reviewed By: shadowsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg...this was so good! A little confusing with all the him's and he's and such, but very well written.Great job!awww...please Ryou..don't die!!*sniffle*
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