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| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] | | Pages (74): [ « ‹ 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 › » ] | Reviewed By: AizenMyoo On: August 19, 2005 08:02 PDT
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That was the most beautiful story! I cried so much and laughed so much my husband thought I was going crazy ^^ You so wonderfully made the point that family is not always blood related which I think is some thing not said nearly enough in today's society. Thank you for writing such a heart warming story.
| Title: madosie
Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 14:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this has to be the most addicting fanfic I've read! I couldn't stop reading. I loved your knowledge of the characters and the amazing creativity. It was really fun. Keep writing, this was fantastic!
| Reviewed By: Tilvan On: August 03, 2005 23:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truly an incrdible piece of writing. This is the kind of story that made me want to become a writer in the first place. To be able to invoke such powerful feelings simply from words, It makes me wish that More Faniction writers would put more effort into their work. I must say that I have only ever read one piece of writing, including published books, that made me feel for the characters more than this one has, and given me cause to read it more than once. That piece of writing was the 'Tamers Forever' series by Daneel Rush. That series and this piece of writing are, in my mind, among the best pieces of writing I have ever read. I actually thought that your story was better than The Lord of the Rings but thats probally just me. Please, I implore you to keep writing masterpieces like this. And I want to thank you for giving me so much insperation, without having read this story and 'Tamers Forever' I never would have wanted to start writing. Thank you and may all of your endeavors be as sucsessful as this one.
| Reviewed By: MG On: August 02, 2005 19:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:In tears: Wow, that all I have to say! This has had to ahve been THE best fanfiction -no- story that I have ever read! Every single character was perfect, and all of the children were so vividly 'drawn' out, that, just....wow! But I am so sad that it is over! Hopefully you've written other fanfictions this good, or are going to! I'm going to go check tat out right now! Keep up the good work, and maybe someday you could be a famous author, I know you have the potential! Sayonara -MG
| Title: wow!!!
Reviewed By: Lady Mana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 22:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely loved this fic! *giggles* i didn't mind that Inuyasha was out of character. i mean come on, he didn't want any of the hanyou they rasied (mainly Yukio) to have the life he had. Oh, i should also say Eri too, since she's a neko Youkai, a full one... i wish i was here when you started this story too...anyways, i am currently reading the sequel to this and well, i loved this one! Bye!
| Title: EMAIL
Reviewed By: inuoden On: July 27, 2005 16:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz email me at deadlyhib@hotmail.com i wish to discuss a few thigns with you...NOTHING bad, just wanna talk :D k?
| Reviewed By: Shandi On: July 14, 2005 04:15 PDT
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OMG! I love this fanfic....I've spent the last 4 nights/mornings staying up to read it. I'm so damn addicted to it. Curse you! *laughs* I'm only up to ch. 24 but so far I love it and can't get enough. Thank you so much! *goes back to reading at 6:14 AM and still hasn't slept)
| Reviewed By: toner On: July 13, 2005 19:41 PDT
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Is Inuyasha a man or what? he's so frickin insecure and submissive here that you can't tell if he's got balls or what. A tender and loving man is sexy, but to be so self-pitying and disrespecting of himself is just a downright turnoff. After all, how can others respect a person who doesn't have an ounce of self-esteem? You should make Inuyasha like, he's endured a hard past and all, and there's always that shadow behind himself; but he at least acts like a man, tough it out, give the impression of self-confidence and unattainablity, and dish out his ability, his actions to make people truly admire him. Yet, underneath all that, he's still shy and insecure, but only in front of the people that he trust the most in the world, so his faults will add even more to his beauty. Aside from that, your story is pretty nice, thoughtful at places. And trust me, I don't find a lot of thoughtful stories these days. This is the suggestion that I would make about it.
| Reviewed By: GabrielleDay [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 21:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I have never read a fic this long...but this story was SO good that I couldn't help but read it all. Your characterizations are beautiful, your original characters all have depth and their own personalities and are endearing to the reader. The amount of effort you put into the details amazes me. The Lucky Ones is one of the best fics I have ever read. Kudos to you, you did an absolutely amazing job, and I would read this again in a heartbeat.
| Title: wow...
Reviewed By: mizbum2u(NLI) On: June 30, 2005 09:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... i just started reading this... its funny! and sweet! too bad i wasn't here when you began writing it! i just wanted to clarify one thing though... PHUC is vietnamese yes, but it isn't pronounced that was. PH-f, Uc- uc= fuck. LOL its not that way... im vietnamese and its pronounced "phoup" kinda like that... LOL well yeah... good job on writing all this! it took me 3 days to finish it! LOL
| Reviewed By: Cougiecat On: June 15, 2005 13:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
here here! (Review of Inu OOC) yeah the Inu you have in your story is NOT the Inu in the manga- but why would he be? He's grow more comfortable, opened up more, and gotten closer to Kagome. I think the only times I've felt him a little off was when he started to get all self-pitying. But he's done that too (when reflecting on the hanyou Jenengi- sorry can't spell worth anything). But also a big part of this story is Inu growing past the resentment and prejudice of his childhood. Also- I was wondering if Kouga ever insulted Inu about being a hanyou? Mutt, Dog-shit, yes. but I don't remember hanyou. He probably has, I just don't remember. One of the things I like about Kouga is that though he's always fighting with Inu, most of his insults aren't really... mean. hum.. will have to rewatch the first episode w/ Kouga to see what he dishes out. Anyway, excellent story. thought I'd take a mid story break to write a review.
| Reviewed By: momcitrus not signed in On: June 04, 2005 13:37 PDT
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AWWWW.....This story certainly must have won some fanfic contests; I wonder, did they have to create a category just for this unique genre? (Cute and Adorable Fic) And holy smokes, that harrowing chapter about baby Ian's birth reminded me why I cravenly chose nasty, natural childbirth 3 times rather than face a hospital setting. (Shudders at the thought.) Thank you for an unusual and fun reading rxperience.
| Reviewed By: Inuyashaskoishii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 23:52 PDT
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i'm only seven chapters in, but the lucky ones is so adorable!!! i love it to death!!! ^_^
| Title: Heyy
Reviewed By: beccapatty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 09:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heyy I wrote a review for u on Adultfanfiction as well lol even tho i didnt read ur story at either of those 2 sites. Kokololio.com was where i read it. I wasn't sure if ud get the review from adultfanfiction cuz im not certain they alert u when u get a review. im pretty sure here does.. well it does for me.. I Just wanted to let ya know that ur story is the most amazing story ive ever read. It brought me soo many emotions it was awe worthy. I loved every single bit of the story.. Some of my favorite things were the Inuyoukai Talking "mother female, Leader male" "Pup Good" "you will obey leader male!" I lovedd all that! soo cute.. and i loved the lemons u had, the fact that u made Kagome able to breast feed everyone of her hanyou children. and just the kind hearted ness of it all.. The combining Kikyo and Midoriko was a very very original interesting idea.. never heard of it. Ooo and all their troubles along the way.. between the Hanyou Mirokus fear of rejection, Yukios dispair over his lost mate, The evil gynecologist, the troubles they had with actually having their own child, having to lose some of ur children by another family member or ur own hands.( Inuyasha having to kill a couple of the kids who were gonna hurt Kagome or were suffering) ALL of it.. It made for a very very very well written story! I loved it and always will and just wanted to let u kno that.. Keep up the awesome work and plzz update The Coyote child soon! Can't Wait! :) :) :) :) :)~Becca~
| Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 18:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've also been made late for work because of this plus late for a session of the RPG I run and after I finally finished this story after three days I was very happy to see another story set in the same ficton. Then when I finished THAT I started re-reading this one all over again. Thanks!
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