| "sensei lost control" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: flame
Reviewed By: anime_gal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 19:14 CST
Comment/Review:
FLAME...that was totally OOC. you STNK!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ty_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo sis what's up. I enjoyed the fic. Very entertaining lol tho I hafta say you gotta work on the spelling and grammar. But it was, overall, great. Talk to ya soon LUV ALWAYS!! Paula Zubie!^_^
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Title: review by Sailor J
Reviewed By: SailorJ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great even if I didn't like the pairing. You are a way better writer then me. Well I wouldn't go that far I don't want to put myself down. Anyway keep up the good work.
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Title: review by alison
Reviewed By: alison [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i gave the style of writing a five just becasue i dont prefer this kind. lol....i thought you were VERY creative on this story and it was quite amusing to read and i was laughing through out the whole thing....thats why it took so long for me to read it....anyway, it was cute and i enjoyed reading it. lol REAL FUNNY!! since that fic wasnt as serious as the others, i guess it was allowed to be OOC. but damn.....it was hilarious. lololololol great job hahahaha....aw man....good laugh....that earned that laugh of the day...lol
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Reviewed By: InuGirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 20:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good Lilly! your mistakes are getting few and far between and your ooc-ness has gotten rapidly better with each fic! Within a short amount of time you've gone from a fic n00b to a author with great potential! I really liked the AU setting tho!
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