| "Awoke" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Burning with envy On: September 27, 2004 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't give the enjoyment factor a higher rating dammit. Yusuke the lucky bastard got to get laid by Hiei, I'd gladly burn in the fire of Hiei's desire. How you portrayed their little uhhh enterlude I found immensily satisfying. Well done I say, I'd gladly read more if you made more, I'll have to check and see if you did. Oh as an after thought I do have a mm.org account I'm lady Lunara I just didn't feeling like logging in. Ta ta.
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Reviewed By: Emme113 On: August 12, 2004 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually, I think you did a beautiful job protraying Hiei and Yuusuke. I found them quiet in character, though I must say your "(you want chopsticks? Too bad!)" comment to be distruptive if highly amusing. I'm also rather fond of the moment when Hiei tells Yuusuke he's beautiful and Yuusuke drops everything everywhere. You did an excellent job!
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: JB On: July 23, 2004 10:54 CDT
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Hiei/Yuusuke is my favorite pairing, but it never seems to be anywhere. Your fic was awesome, and I liked it alot! I really have to tell my friend Jeremy about this one... Um, well, great fic! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kumori no Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehe... I love this fic! It's so... COOL! ^__^ Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 02:08 CST
Comment/Review:
liked it!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: Hieiloverf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 12:05 CST
Comment/Review:
It is god make a sequel or another fanfic on Hiei and Yusuke
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Title: It is good fic
Reviewed By: HieiYusuke On: March 25, 2004 11:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey it is good i like it. I am a big fan os Hiei and Yusuke i havent found anyone else yet that wirte about them glade iam not hte only one. it was very good if you want read mines they eare 11 type in my arhtur name Hiei and Yusuke. Well it was good*_*hope you like mines.
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Reviewed By: Kazzie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 02:23 CST
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I love you for writing a Hiei/Yusuke! I've been searching for fics with that pairing for what seemed to be forever and haven't found much.. but I found your story, and it was great.. thanks so much for writing it. XD
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Reviewed By: DarkLight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was exceptionaly good. I'm more partial to Kurama/Hiei parings, but that was enough to make me change my opinion. I really liked how you displayed Hiei. It seemed exactly like him! Please keep up the good work!
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