| "Tails Vanilla Cream" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Pwned
Reviewed By: LTPrower [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok these guys may not like it but I do, I think Tails cream and Vanilla is Creative and im hoping to see more chapters I give you a 10.
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Reviewed By: foxkit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 18:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
....Um...I'm just plain scared. Other than the fact I'm not a huge yuri fan, incest between mother and daughter is frightening. And please, next time, you may consider using spellcheck on your fic or having someone else look over it before you post, because the grammer and spelling mistakes really take away from the reader's concentration. You may also consider drawing out the story, and use a different beginning to draw the reader in. Other than that, keep practicing! ^_^
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Title: 7hi5 suxors
Reviewed By: sessler [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
this suxors
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Reviewed By: ThePD [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
If it was ment to be a PwP, awesome. If it was not ment to be a PwP, what happened to said plot? Cream doing her mom is strange, but then again, its your fic, not ours. Good job scaring the other reviewers!
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Title: it ok
Reviewed By: the rad red [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was ok for a lemon but you could have been a little more indepth and cream doing her mom ... no y no not right
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Reviewed By: Insane Ekkidnaa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 12:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Did you notice that Vanilla is Cream's MOTHER??!!! Nice lemon, but please.. belgh.
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Reviewed By: kattx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 16:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
here's a little constructive critique: this story wasn't half bad, wasn't half good either, but you're still building up plot. next time, put more description and speech into it, this way, the audience keeps an interest into things. and bondage is way too overrated. try edible body paint next time
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