| "When That Day Comes" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kirei (same reason for TA review!) On: August 27, 2004 20:56 CDT
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Wheeeee!!!!!! Update! Update! Update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 15:06 CDT
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Yeah yeah, only staring would be hilarious XD. Anyway, this chapter was all..o.o scary! And like..They didnt kiss >.< Kirei wouldnt have liked that anyway eheh. Yeah! So update soon! Make the next one longer! See ya!
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Reviewed By: Kirei (I thought I was logged in) On: July 13, 2004 19:31 CDT
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Yay! You finally posted the new chappie! You're getting better with updating! It wasn't a full two months this time, so give yourself a pat on the back or something! I can't wait for the next one! Hope the writer's block goes away! And I hope that I can type up my new story for you to see soon! Byes for now!
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Reviewed By: setofanatic On: June 25, 2004 11:48 CDT
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What about u updating before 2 months? I'm reviewing in JUNE!!! But this is a good story so I woun't complain, but please updae soon. thankies!!! -SF
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Reviewed By: Kirei (not logged in) On: May 24, 2004 18:19 CDT
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I'll refrain from killing and or hurting you or chasing after Saki...Great chappie though! Can't wait for the next! Despite what may happen...*whispering over and over to herself* It's not real, it's not real, it's not real!
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Reviewed By: Saki (not signed in) On: May 24, 2004 17:14 CDT
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Oooh..that would be cool if they kissed..cuz Bakura is awesome *runs away from Kirei* hehe well i'm glad Saki and Seto are..looking at each other funny XD. Well update soon! Or i'll bug you!
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Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 20:48 CDT
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Sooo...did ya finish chappie 5 yet? POST IT IF YA DID! I'm dying right now! Oooh, I know! I'll bug ya at school! And I'm sure Saki is bugging the hell outta ya, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Corinne On: March 23, 2004 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really good. You should definently write more fanfics like that. I can't wait to read more!
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Title: When That Day Comes
Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 15:38 CST
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Yay! Chapter four was great! I'll try to update mine soon if people will review for it! And I'm working on two fics at the same time (do not try this at home)! I finished the one I told you about in school and I'm gonna post it later on!
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Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 14:44 CST
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Yay! I read it the third chapter and I'm loving your fic even more! (if that's possible) The story lie is going so well and I hope that you don't get writer's block any time soon!
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Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 17:41 CST
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Continue continue continue!! I know what you told me at scholl about continuing but you have to hurry!!! You know I can't handle suspense!!! Great story line!!! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 15:16 CST
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OOhh yet another cool story ^^ now THIS is interesting! o.O but she woke up on the floor..how sad. This is suspenseful! You MUST MUST update!!
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 19:54 CST
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Oh, I'm interested! Please do continue! I wanna know what happens! Normally, I'm not al that interested in Mary Sue, but this /is/ intresting! And I wanna know! So, yes, please continue!
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Title: Thanks!
Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 18:40 CST
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As my tradition goes, I thank you as my first reviewer! Though I excpeted that since I had told you about it the day I put it up (yes, it is the one I told you about at the dance)... Oh well! Thanks for the review! I'm sorry but as soon as 2 other people review I will post the second chapter. I'm almost done typing it! See ya at school!
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Title: When That Day Comes
Reviewed By: Kirei On: February 28, 2004 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could actually read it and understand it! Is this the one you were telling me about at the dance? I like it so far...please, please, please continue!
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