| "When That Day Comes" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Darrvader On: January 24, 2008 08:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
Its preety good. Theres not much going on at all tho. Altho that might be the perpose. Well if it isn't its Quite boring. Sorry
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Reviewed By: Aubrey On: October 13, 2004 16:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice ficcy! And the ryo was in it! *attempting to rember spell*
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Reviewed By: Weird On: October 06, 2004 20:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! finally ShamonaCeline i have found were you reviewed!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! nice fic, Rikoh and i will still chase Riz! MWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 20:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! It's over..well that's not the yay part but anyways...scary O.o. I scare myself sometimes XD. can't wait for the sequel...cuz i'll be married to Seto! And have a child! >.O how scary. Hehe well as I said, can't wait. Write it soon!
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Title: Riz from Bloopers for Everyone!
Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 22:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey Rikoh! nice story, i read it today then to the last... oh God! you really are good at agnst or angst... anyways nice fic!
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Reviewed By: Kirei (>< grrr, damn you MM!) On: September 23, 2004 14:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
*paranoid look* I snuck on to read it! Mwahahaha! *hjears footsteps and ducks under the desk* It was a good chapter, dun care it was short! Can't wait for the sequel! ^_^ *comes out from under the desk* Yay! Rikoh's happy! ^_^ O.O *hides under desk again* >< Dun let em get me! Again, I can't wait for the sequel! Now I need to start thiniing bout stuff to write for Piercing the Skin...
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 18:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, interesting. Needless to say somethin is going on >.>. Poor Saki..and uh..poor Rikoh. Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kirei (same reason for TA review!) On: August 27, 2004 20:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wheeeee!!!!!! Update! Update! Update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 15:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah yeah, only staring would be hilarious XD. Anyway, this chapter was all..o.o scary! And like..They didnt kiss >.< Kirei wouldnt have liked that anyway eheh. Yeah! So update soon! Make the next one longer! See ya!
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Reviewed By: Kirei (I thought I was logged in) On: July 13, 2004 19:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! You finally posted the new chappie! You're getting better with updating! It wasn't a full two months this time, so give yourself a pat on the back or something! I can't wait for the next one! Hope the writer's block goes away! And I hope that I can type up my new story for you to see soon! Byes for now!
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Reviewed By: setofanatic On: June 25, 2004 11:48 CDT
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What about u updating before 2 months? I'm reviewing in JUNE!!! But this is a good story so I woun't complain, but please updae soon. thankies!!! -SF
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Reviewed By: Kirei (not logged in) On: May 24, 2004 18:19 CDT
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I'll refrain from killing and or hurting you or chasing after Saki...Great chappie though! Can't wait for the next! Despite what may happen...*whispering over and over to herself* It's not real, it's not real, it's not real!
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Reviewed By: Saki (not signed in) On: May 24, 2004 17:14 CDT
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Oooh..that would be cool if they kissed..cuz Bakura is awesome *runs away from Kirei* hehe well i'm glad Saki and Seto are..looking at each other funny XD. Well update soon! Or i'll bug you!
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Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 20:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sooo...did ya finish chappie 5 yet? POST IT IF YA DID! I'm dying right now! Oooh, I know! I'll bug ya at school! And I'm sure Saki is bugging the hell outta ya, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Corinne On: March 23, 2004 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really good. You should definently write more fanfics like that. I can't wait to read more!
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