| "a new day" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Ummmm......There's a mistake
Reviewed By: Spikecicle On: September 20, 2004 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made a mistake your story starts at chapter three and where is the first and second chapter? It's a good story though.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story hope u update soon
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 19:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
chpts are backwards and the story is confusing right now. plz add a chpt or two soon
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 19:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting...plz update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyuyurrk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 11:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was really great Hope u update soon!!!
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Title: good start
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start to the fic. Update soon. Would like to see what happens when every one meets.
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Reviewed By: skilled assassin gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 19:28 CST
Comment/Review:
plz continue if you don't i'll hunt you down
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Reviewed By: neko_ youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is good,but you need more description between dialogue, because it gets confusing. And try to be consistent with the style of the text(random bold of sentences)
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