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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so looking forward to the next update. This is such a clever, very well written, extremely funny look at how Yohji's mind words. The guy is so NOT gay,(snicker, yah right!)In your dreams Yohji. And Aya is just as funny in his subtle giving in to his team mate. I don't think that I have read a story as entertaining in a long time (or at least not since I last time I read this).
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Title: Hello, goodbye chapter 7
Reviewed By: tutyfrty On: January 03, 2010 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read the whole story again and it is so darn funny. Each chapter is very, very amusing, poor Yohji just can not get ahead of the game with Aya. I absolutely love this story, it is so well written and funny. Bravo, well done. Looking forward to more soon (I hope).
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2009 08:22 CDT
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Hahahaha, this has got to be one of the best fics, most assuredly comedy wise that i have read and no matter how many times i read it from the beginning its still so gosh-darn funny. Please update soon and keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: November 12, 2008 20:37 CST
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Poor Yohji--Aya's one-upsmanship is just too much for him!
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Title: Chapter 6 Hello, Goodnight
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! this is hilarious. Aya tying a knot in a cherry stem if only I could see that. This is so well written and so very funny. Well done.
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Reviewed By: Caitlebug [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 06:44 CDT
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HAHAHA! God I love this fic. (sorry it took me so long to get here to finally read and appreciate it!) As always: I want for more :D
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Title: Hello, Goodnight
Reviewed By: tutyfrty On: September 12, 2008 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! this is so funny. I hope that you will add more chapters soon. Great job. Trudy
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: September 11, 2008 23:17 CDT
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this is so much fun! please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 22:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
lovely! i'd forgotten how much i love this fic!
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Reviewed By: Caitlebug [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 17:47 CDT
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HAHA! Hilarious! Oh god, this was great. The way her name was continuously changed. Starling, no sprinkles, no sparkle. And "misty"...woot! I hope he tries something soon with that one! This update was worth the wait. But more importantly...I wonder what MY aura looks like...XD
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Title: Gothria
Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yohji is a rhinestone rainbow!!! *dies laughing* your story is awesome. i forgot exactly how much i liked it until you updated. that was great. there are waaaay to many angsty weiss stories, and i think this one does well to counter-act all of those. update more! i like macaroni-sparkels girl haha.
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: April 06, 2008 19:59 CDT
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well, I'm still enjoying it!
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Reviewed By: Caitlebug [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 16:14 CDT
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I must say that this was one of the first Aya and Yohji fics that I read once introduced to mediaminer. And thank goodness for that! No matter how many times I reread it, I still find the story fantastic, not to mention hilarious. I wish it would have had a more concrete ending, but I'll take what I can get :) Anyways, love it, and I'm determined to explore your others works!
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Reviewed By: red queen On: February 16, 2006 13:27 CST
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huh, it looks like i haven't reviewed to tell you how great this li'l fic is. ooohhh, i love vengeful!Aya. and poor yohji's in thrall to aya, he's written so well! i'm glad you're updating things now and again, it's very satisfying. you know, i read constantly keen over again, and as usual got massively pissed that it'll never be finished...and it occurred to me that you and deena have similar senses of humor. ever consider writing the rest of that story yourself? :)
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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 03:00 CST
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*points and laughs* i love it! poor yotan. he should like...steal everything from aya's closet and replace it w/bondage stuff. muwah. eewwww. raw eggs?! aya's a butthead. i love this story so much, although it took u too long to update! more frequency please!! o_o can omi become a tree hugger and live in the woods/forest/park? tha'd be cool. funny funny, i love it! so...update more!! =^^=
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