| "Too Much To Ask" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: ssp On: November 02, 2004 09:34 CST
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I agree with you. I'd kick out Bakura. He might have an impact on the whole series, but he's not that important in the Battle City Finals. Continue. Yes, I agree with you. Eshe is a bit naive.
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Reviewed By: ssp On: September 23, 2004 18:07 CDT
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I read this story. There are a lot of stories where Kaiba has some girl from the orphanage, but most of them are CYOAs. I like your twist on how Kaiba rejects her. Also, I like how you had Weevil Underwood win. She's defintely no Mary Sue which is really annoying. Just update more often and have an idea on what direction you want to go. Put something original about yours that will diffrentiate this story from all the other Seto/OC fics. What I like about your story is she is no Mary Sue. Just update soon and have some more description.
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Reviewed By: Kris1rad [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 13:44 CDT
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I like this story. Spacing needs a little work (But it's part of Mediaminer's fault). Better update a Eshe/Seto romance. Think you could some more songs in there like the Inu Yasha's 3rd ending song, "Dearest?" If ya need lyrics than ask me. Thank you! Bye!
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Reviewed By: Samantha J.C On: March 28, 2004 16:42 CST
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Sam-Excelent! I love your fic. But I have one sugestion: have Eshe meet up with Bakura and have them duel! Only then if she looses she of cource will lose only one locator card and Yami could save her from the Shadow Realm!....ok well anyway please update soon! and keep up the great work!
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