Reviewed By: Skullknightx01x [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like the story so far, I think you should be more descriptive in your action and character descriptions. So far the story flows pretty well and I look forward to the next chapter keep up the writing. SKULLKNIGHTX01X
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