| "What's Sex?" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: aura56 On: March 21, 2004 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
this is a weird story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kylio On: March 08, 2004 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that. I think it was funny
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Title: remember
Reviewed By: April C/Nagi On: March 04, 2004 20:11 CST
Comment/Review:
***acck! forgive me if this is double MM seems to be acting up tonight brings me back to grade school.remember when they would take all the girls into one class and the boys into another and teach us this crap.we would quietly giggle to ourselves knowing quite well that the teachers were bakas thinking we didn't know anything as she pointed items out on the overhead projector.... its a good thing shippo doesnt have teachers like us..instead hes got inu yasha who cant xplain it,miroku who gets t detailed and the girls who want to explain it to him in the correct and proper manner.. Id like to see a second chapter, a little longer and touching on the subject of kagome and inu yasha relationship...we know Souta has so why not Shippou lol...would make for great laughs and perhaps a little fluff? ok ive written enuff Kawaii story tho :) ~Nagi
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Title: remember
Reviewed By: InuNagi On: March 04, 2004 20:08 CST
Comment/Review:
brings me back to grade school.remember when they would take all the girls into one class and the boys into another and teach us this crap.we would quietly giggle to ourselves knowing quite well that the teachers were bakas thinking we didn't know anything as she pointed items out on the overhead projector.... its a good thing shippo doesnt have teachers like us..instead hes got inu yasha who cant xplain it,miroku who gets t detailed and the girls who want to explain it to him in the correct and proper manner.. Id like to see a second chapter, a little longer and touching on the subject of kagome and inu yasha relationship...we know Souta has so why not Shippou lol...would make for great laughs and perhaps a little fluff? ok ive written enuff Kawaii story tho :) ~Nagi
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