| "~Tired Hearts~" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: My Bad
Reviewed By: Crazy Ash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 21:53 CST
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Sorry...^^; heh. Yeah, my comp sorta crashed for a while and well...I was almost done with the next chapter and now it gone...all gone...*cries* I'm really sorry, but I've already started rewriting it and it should be up, well, soon I hope. *bows* Please forgive me!
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Title: La la la...
Reviewed By: Chibi-Suiko (nli) On: January 21, 2005 10:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
...Erm... Any reason why you haven't updated in over half a year...?
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Reviewed By: Crazy Ash [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 20:52 CDT
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Aiiiieee!! Don't worry Chibi-Suiko!! I've got lots of things planned for May! ^_~ I hope you're all enjoying it! I will update a LOT over summer. Trust me! My last exams are tomorrow, so after that I'm free! Oh,and I'm not a fan of Ash/May. Then why am I writing this, you ask? Hmm...you just wait. And I'm just a strange person.
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Title: **Jaw Dropped**
Reviewed By: Chibi-Suiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 07:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm... Not sure what to say. It's just really wierd because Advanceshipping doesn't suite me at all and I don't see Ash and May together at any part of the series, nor in my very imaginative mind. But things are looking up and I like what you're doing with it. I just don't know what to think of May now, since I'm an official anti-character basher. I just don't like her being portrayed as a 'bitch' or an 'impossible character'. I hope that you have something planned for her after you've transformed this fic around a bit! Also, thanks for the review you gave me in my fic! I really appreciate it and I wouldn't mind more of your positive feedback soon!
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Reviewed By: gladdecease (too lazy to sign in) On: May 31, 2004 13:55 CDT
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Well, this is a bit confusing, but I can't wait for more! Write more soon! Later!
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Title: awesome!!
Reviewed By: Kacie On: May 20, 2004 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is great so far!! The dream sequence was my favorite part! It was well detailed! Oh, and I agree that Ash and Misty should get together in your fic. May and Ash...I can't see them together. Anyway, please update soon! It's really good!
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Title: Oh... IT'S YOU!
Reviewed By: Chibi-Suiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the fic but I'm hoping that the Advanceshipping direction doesn't last for long. No offense; it's not that I can't stand May, it's just that I can't stand May with Ash. If people weren't getting such CRAZY, LUDACRIS IDEAS... Anyway, it's completely wrong for May/Ash to get together. Sry, that's just my belief. But I hope that Ash gets somewhere with how he feels for our fave redhead! CAUSE THAT'S WHAT MATTERS! PS: Thanks for your review to my fic; I had received one here before where the reviewer said quote 'It sux', unquote. It really put me in a baaaad mood. But, thanks to you, it's all gone! YAY! Happiness and sugar fluff all around! Eh..? Oh... Ignore me...
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Chibi-Suiko (Not logged in_ On: April 14, 2004 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving this so far. I'm glad you updated. I was waiting... And no, I'm not a stalker. I just hope you plan on continuing this regularly. --Chibi is pleased!
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Title: Zoid
Reviewed By: Zoid [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, i'm a fanfic writer of Pokemon and Zoids. I liked your story, but i think it could do without those up-down rectangles and symbols. However i liked it and i was thinking, i could make a joint story with the help of your ideas as well as mine. Review my fics. In the pokemon ics are called The Shedding of Tears part 1 and then part 2. Part 2 isn't finished but i'm hoping to finish it. write a sequel to this story though
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