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| "The Z Senshi Titans" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: SSgt Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again, Benjamin. This is C/Staff Sergeant Collazo. I see you didn't read the last review I sent. Even I write better stories than you ever could, in every way I know how. I check the grammatical structuring, I proofread my stories before I print them, and if I find any mistakes, I go back and correct them. I'd be willing to help you out, but apparently that's not going to do you any good. Here's what I'm saying, in a nutshell: You can't fix stupid, which is exactly what you are.
| Reviewed By: SailorMercury712004 On: October 31, 2004 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ay, que lastima. Que appendejado eres. No saves como dicir cosas buenas y your spelling sucks bigtime! I mean, Destory? Hey, there are a lot of things you really need to learn, mi amigo. Look, some parts of your Dios-forbidden fanfic are so screwed up that you'll most likely scare off any and all potential readers with your grammar, which is severely lacking. Another thing, get rid of all this bad language. Think of it from my perspective. I'm looking at a fanfiction that is so badly misspelled that it's not even funny. And what's with your choice of words(fuck, shit, damn, etc.)? As Xzibit once said, "Coordinate, brother, coordinate!"
| Reviewed By: TZ On: September 09, 2004 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I got ta get C: 23
| Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 16:22 CST
Comment/Review:
hi that was a real good fic. Could i possibly be in it?
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