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Reviewed By: hariko_tanaka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's great!!but why did gojyo have to ruin things??it's really funny....hope you do more!!!i also like it cause it doesn't have any lemon....
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Reviewed By: justkat...realio trulio On: August 30, 2004 02:24 CDT
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I like this! A lot. Funny and cute. I particularly like the bit where it says Chapter 1.^^ More please?
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Reviewed By: Jan Brown On: April 27, 2004 18:56 CDT
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Okay, this was fun...darn that Goyjo! Just as things were getting reaaalllly interesting!! I was rolling on the floor...Sanzo waking up to find out he had been licked! Oh...rolling. on. the. floor! ^_^ ! The scene was too priceless and funny! (Goku was so sweet wanting to "know" Sanzo with all his senses...what a sweet image...no sexual overtones at all...great job!) Looking forward to reading more of your stories.
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Reviewed By: gallatica^^ On: March 26, 2004 09:18 CST
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gyaah!!! why'd u let gojyo stop him??? *stranglechokestrangle* :D ehehehhe.........encore!!
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Reviewed By: Kingslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wonderfully done. Your Goku 'voice' has an exquisite tone and flow to it. I can easily follow his thought patterns and instantly understand his innocent, but hinted at feelings. Subtle, and yet, not. The balance is just right. The humour here is also done well, quite reminiscent of the humour in the manga, which I enjoyed immensely too. One little nitpick would be this: "What was that thing made out of it that it stung so bad?" 'Of it' should be taken out to fix up the sentencing. Other than that, nothing else to add. I just liked your writing so much, I decided to do something I normally don't do a lot of: review.
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