Reviewed By: Hiimbob979 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall a fairly good story, but most of the information you posted isnt exactly too hard to figure out. Also, since practically nothing happens, I admit it's not the most exciting thing I've ever read. I would like to invite you to read my story, as well. Unfortunately, there is a major glitch in the system, and you cant get to the most updated version that includes up to chapter 13. It's called the order of the purple robe, and its a final fantasy/original (i used some final fantasy spells in it) you SHOULD be able to read up to chapter 11, at least. Thanx!
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