| "What type of person are you?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Conqueror_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it you should continue and see where it goes.
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 19:47 CST
Comment/Review:
the story was great. the only little problem with it is that the people who are talking don't have quotation marks to tell the reader that they are talking. but all in all...i LOVED the chapter!!!!
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Title: Um---erms
Reviewed By: Diako On: March 10, 2004 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
the spelling was okay, the story could use some improvement, but the thing that really bugged me was the lack of puncuation, I had trouble following it cause it was like this the whole time and that was annoying and all so i think you should put in more punctuation. Also the grr part was not needed.
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