Reviewed By: Hiimbob979 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall a pretty good story. There are a few spelling errors that I noticed, that you may want to fix. Im interested to read the next chapter when you come out with it. Your storyline has some good humor in it, along with a nice cliffhanger at the end. It also seems to show that you are somewhat educated in the medieval times. I would also like to invite you to read a story of my own creating. It's called the Order of the Purple Robe. There is a weird error in it, however, so the only way to read it is to select either chapter 10 or 11, and then scroll back to the prologue. Thank you, and keep up the good work!
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