Reviewed By: Phoenix Hoshika [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hmm, I am not that familiar with this these characters at all but as I read I could get a pretty good idea of who they were and a little of what their world is like. Some sentences made me a little confused but I mostly understood what you were trying to say. Overall you kept me interested; loved the fight scence.
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