| "InuYasha a modern fairytail." Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Title: AWSOME!!!!
Reviewed By: hglover2 On: April 28, 2004 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, ur story is AWSOME! i loved it. u seem like a cool person. i wish i knew u as a friend. i like ur attitude. it seems to be very... well... cool. well, i hope u write more soon. ur a very good no great writer. Bye.
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Reviewed By: InuYumi On: April 28, 2004 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luuved dis story, but it iz kinda weird dat Inuyasha liked Kagome in such a short period of time.
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 15:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love the new chapter update soon Kyla *smiles*
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Reviewed By: KenshinLover45 On: April 27, 2004 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
People might say I'm wrong, but I really don't think you're doing a very good job. After reading the first few chapters I couldn't read it anymore, but I thought I should tell you what you did wrong. First, your style of writing is way too fast. You really need to slow down and add detail to things. Spelling and Grammar were by far the worst. I found spelling errors right and left! For originality/creativity, I gave you an eight. I did think this story was very original, even though I didn't read much of it. Consitering the other factors, the enjoyment was a five. Not good. I couldn't get into the story at all. It was confusing because you couldn't tell who was speaking, who was thinking, and what they were doing. The chapters were also too short. My overall rating for this story is a four. Even the high originality cannot make up for the other faults. I am also a twelve-year-old writer. I'll be 13 this summer, and I write, edit, and review stories often. You can still improve, and that's all I'm trying to do is help you improve. Go on with this story for all of your fans. I hope you weren't offended by any of this review. Please keep writing, and don't deny the world of a great future writer. If you wish to reach my, my email is wibble45@hotmail.com.
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 19:17 CDT
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I love the newe chapter and to let you know, i am indeed the same IYWriterGirl.. your note if you forgot Kyla M, The following review has been submitted to: Charming Chapter: 2 From: inudog() great chapter i really enjoyed reading it!The japanese name for the god tree is the Goshinboku. Please update soon!IYWriterGirl?R u talkin Mediaminer.org or ff.net?I have a reviewer on mediaminer.org who goes by that name! my pen name on Mediaminer.org is inuangel82 I do not have a handle on ff.net because i'm a half a year too young! thank you for the review (inudog....lol) glad you like my big words and my fic, Charming, check out IYWriter on both ff.net and mm.org Kyla
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Title: punctuation
Reviewed By: inupoo On: April 27, 2004 02:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
where are the quotation marks?
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Reviewed By: squirrelboy On: April 26, 2004 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tyhis is the coolest ever lots of OOC but the best use of it i hav ever seen i salute u and ive only saluted 3 other stories so great job believe me im a hard ass and im even saying good job
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Title: inuyasha
Reviewed By: xxsparkle29xx On: April 25, 2004 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey ......loved the story but its so interesting could you do me a favor? can you make the story a little longer if you can thanxz well hurry and make the next one laterz i out bye
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Caiti On: April 25, 2004 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really great fanfic so far i cant wait to read the rest of it. Email:Riversmaster@aol.com
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl( i dont know if im signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 17:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
i read the fic you suggested it was awesome. i loved your new chapter too! update soon and tell you friend to also....
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl (not signed in) On: April 25, 2004 16:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
luv the new chapter
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Reviewed By: kagomeinuyashafan (signed in) On: April 25, 2004 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE ur story (fanfic) and i want 2 hear more so can u please write more chapters
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Title: inuyasha
Reviewed By: xxsparkle29xx On: April 21, 2004 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing ilove your stories!!!!! i want to know what happens w/ inuyasha and kagome!!!!
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Reviewed By: Bianca P. On: April 21, 2004 18:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Keep on writing you got a great story going on here.PLEASE dont take the story off. Bianca P. age 12 turning 13 on july 8
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Reviewed By: Bianca P. On: April 21, 2004 18:55 CDT
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Keep on writing you got a great story going on here.PLEASE dont take the story off Bianca P. age 12 turning 13 on july 8
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