| "InuYasha a modern fairytail." Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 15:49 CDT
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i love your fic. update soon... *smiles* Kyla (writergirldragon@yahoo.com)
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Reviewed By: earth girl On: April 09, 2004 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a pretty good fic. i only had one prob, though. there are no " around the dialog! it's raelly good, other than that!
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Title: tehe
Reviewed By: seizetsu ban-ga-ru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this it's very amusing and i just live how innocent inu-yasha is!keep it up!
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Reviewed By: kikyohater [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 20:05 CST
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YAH! another fan fic with the authour who hate kikyo and naraku. *cheers* did u say u were 12? wow, young age. but im 13, so blah. plz continue and update soon. aww, inuyasha has already fallen in love. PUPPY LOVE!! NOT jks jks. if u do add kikyo (god her name is gay too) i hope something bad happens with her. like if she tries to get inuyasha bac, make inu do some horrible to her. i dont noe, a punch in the face? a kick? something that would make her face full of tears. yea i noe. IM EVIL!!!! but so what? its not like im talking to ppl who likes kikyo rite? n e ways, hope u update soon. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Zhare On: March 25, 2004 04:08 CST
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I like your fic, but it does need a little work. If you want I can beta read it for you, just e-mail me at dragon16@wcnet.org
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Reviewed By: inuyashagirl0208 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
please continue, it sounds pretty good so far! don't include that fucking bith Kikyou alright?
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Title: Review! As demanded!
Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continue! Continue! Continue! (How's this for a damn review? ;) Hehehe!)
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Reviewed By: Kitsune 005 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 20:47 CST
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Your fic rocks!!! Kikyo is the evil one (along with Naraku, that idiot)!!! Continue!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha fan (hehe) On: March 16, 2004 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good! keeeeeep it commmmminngggg...lol...yeah..i really liked it..dont be so down on yourself..cheer up a lil...
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Reviewed By: AMANDA_TRINH On: March 16, 2004 17:09 CST
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GOOD STORY BUT IT NEEDS A LITTLE FLAVOR!!!!BUT IT IS YOUR FIC AND U DO WHATEVER U WANT WITH IT!!!!AGAIN I AM 12 YEARS OLD AND I THINK THAT INUYASHA IS A TOTAL HOTTIE IF HE WAS REAL!!!KIKYO IS A FUCKING BITCH!!!UPDATE SOON!!!
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