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Title: you..
Reviewed By: blazingstar93 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you gotta continue or i'll go rehab!!!!
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Title: I have an idea for you!!!!
Reviewed By: Miakoda_Flame On: April 06, 2005 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have an idea for ya! It came from an idea I was going to use, but was too lazy to put it into use myself. Anyway, the idea goes that the reader is up in the middle of the night, crying because everyone seems to have abandoned her by going out with other people and all. Hiei is up as well, and he hears. He comes in to see what is wrong, and he hears the reader whisper, "Hiei, please do not leave me, you are all I have left." while the person has their back to him and he comforts and all... I dunno how he would comfort someone, so that is up to you, I guess. ^-^;; Hope I was of some help.
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Reviewed By: darkdemoness17 On: March 29, 2005 10:40 CST
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did you title it yet?
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Reviewed By: darkdemoness17 On: March 29, 2005 10:33 CST
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MAYBE A KATANA would be nice.
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Reviewed By: pia9400 On: March 12, 2005 19:39 CST
Comment/Review:
i loved it!! Please write more!!!
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Reviewed By: ................. On: February 07, 2005 18:40 CST
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I like it so far, but there's one thing that I have to say: You get a Hiraikotsu but I don't?! How rude!
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Title: Keep going!!!
Reviewed By: Midoriko InuOokami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 20:20 CDT
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Keep going and don't stop!! I really liked your story, It was kewl. Whatever you do don't stop writing this story. You have very good writing skills you should become a writer. Kuso you're a good writer. Ja ne!!
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Brittany On: August 26, 2004 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well as you requested I read your fanfiction this one to be correct. Any way it was awsome! I liked it a lot and I'm not just saying that! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Inuhime6666 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 13:57 CDT
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it is good ...please try to update soon...well my char is kurai...names norma (it sounds to boring)...and does kendo,fencing,martail arts count...i'm really not into anything else that i could remember at the moment...i'm a shadow demon...FUN!!!...random saying...!!!Ja Ne!!!X__x
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Title: Love It
Reviewed By: Hieis_girl 21190 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like Basketball, I'm a fire demon,and I love this fic. please update soon. ANYWAY, Please continue soon and please check out "Hiei and Me" by Hieis_girl21190 and tell me what you think!!
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Reviewed By: Moon Maiden [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 17:08 CDT
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I like your story. Please update. You know, I'm on a softball team too.
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Reviewed By: kuroikage27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 16:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon
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Reviewed By: kuroikage27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 16:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon
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Title: Oops, guess I forgot to review
Reviewed By: Blarghness! On: May 18, 2004 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
You: Gah! Why are those evil demons killing me????!!!! Hakuo: Oh yeah, I guess I forgot to tell you...
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Reviewed By: HiEi LoVer On: May 09, 2004 22:47 CDT
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love the story please update soon! sorry bout the less time u have...dat does suk....o well update soon!
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