| "True Love At Last" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: YAY!!
Reviewed By: Dove*of*Light On: April 07, 2005 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so different than fanfiction.net!! Wow...they're really counting!! okay, to sum it up, i luv your story. Your originality, don't be mad. i luv it, but it's slightly...typical? Anyway, you give it new meaning though. i will enjoy your story for sure!! Thank you!!
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: January 15, 2005 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutly perfect Kouga is dead! Thank you so much i've been waiting for someone to kill him or at least put him in a coma. This story rocks! I'm dieing to read the next chapter keep it up.
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Reviewed By: fire and napalm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay Neana I'm being constructive here so you are not allowed to kill me. You really only need to work on grammar and punctuation, that's my biggest problem. I really liked the sweet parts ( as much as miss 'dark writer' can) and they were well put together. I like the story too. If you want to continue, work on the Sango/ Miroku. You left an opening there for more story if you wanted. Or you could just start typing the other stories you've got. Either or. And the rating is to be CONSTRUCTIVE. So no assassinations alright? I simply find it vaguely hard to understand due to grammer, that's why its a 9 in those places. Please don't kill me or I can't read any more of your updates.
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Title: DONT END IT YET!!!
Reviewed By: SEX KITTEN On: October 11, 2004 11:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE OR I WILL BE FORCED TO HURT U!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if u need ideas then email me at swimchick1008@sbcglobal.net and i will do my best to help~!!!!!!~ but what ever u do; DONT END IT YET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Naoko Kioshimori On: September 29, 2004 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found it a charming story to read and it enojoyed it. Though I must admit there were some mistakes in spelling and more so in grammer. All in all it was a good story, though maybe each chapter should be longer. And yes i believe it would be interesting to see where the story turns to, so please create more chapters.
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Reviewed By: chmsweety [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it very much! i think you should continue with the story!
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Reviewed By: teenager15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 10:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is good! i can't wait till you update again!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashaluvr On: March 19, 2004 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story...i want more...
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Reviewed By: I_love_Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story, I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: V the anime fan On: March 18, 2004 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HIYAS!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! PLEASE I'M BEGGIN YA TO UPDATE REALLY SOON!!! Keep up the good work and great job, this story rocks!! See YA P.S. I LOVE THIS STORY IT SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuFan545 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!! AWSOME STORY!!!!!!!
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