| "Serendipity" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Perfect
Reviewed By: SkyMaster [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a perfect story. You have started something great and I hope you continue on with it.
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Title: FANTASTIC
Reviewed By: Taiyoukai sesshoumaru On: August 30, 2004 07:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is Fantastic, I have read many but hardly do I ever find one interesting from the beginning its great. ohhh when do they get together and how do they come about it...hmmm, I am still wondering too, there has too be some difficult and fun times too come I will be on the look out. * buwhahahahah* so please let me know when you update. thanks... Princegogeta1@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: duckie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 05:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
So far I like your story, I hope you write more ^_^
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Reviewed By: ryoko imai On: July 08, 2004 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichiwa ^__^ Arigatou for such a wonderful fanfic. I love how you started it. Hai, the beginning is sad, but it's still a great beginning. Kagome has a pretty hard time of it, but things will get better for her. How you described what her mother and fellow villagers went through...it was painful. But as long as Kagome lives and moves on with her life, its okay by me. I love what you have done with Kouga and InuYash. They are totally awesome arguing with eachother. Typical Kouga/Inu relationship. I also like InuYasha's and Kagome's relationship. Thanks for including his kawaii puppy ears. I like the depth that you have invested into your fanfic. It's great. I can't wait for your update. If you can, please send me a copy to ryoko_washu_imai@yahoo.com. I would greatly appreciate it if you could. Keep up the good work. Ciao Ryo P.S. You got yourself a loyal fan. ^___^
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Title: sugoi!!!!
Reviewed By: jazngurl On: June 28, 2004 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sugoi! subarashi! wow, this is such a great fic. i love the relationship you established between Kagome and inuyasha. Its so cute. and kagome, her life sucks and its sad for her to witness all that at such a young age. newayz, i love how you took your time to develop the plot and characters more. I can't wait for Sesshoumaru to come into the story and his relationship with kagome to develop. i think u did a great job portraying inuyasha. sesshoumaru is a pretty hard character to portray because he's almost always emotionless and very serious. but i think you'll do fine. kagome sounds really pretty. and inuyasha, well he's kinda perverted lol. its funny. poor kagome though, she's a 'personal' slave. hopefully, inuyasha won't take advantage of that. well she ever be free? i hope so! well i really really like this fic a lot and i hope that you'll update real soon. I can't wait for more chapters to come. Wow, this is such a long review. hehehehe...i'm trying to use up all my 1500 characters. i have like 400 some what left. well newayz, i think your talented and i want to say thank you for writing this fic for the rest of us to read it. its really enjoyable and i'm quite envious of your obvious talent. i really like ur style of writing too. its really different from other writers. newayz, plz update real soon. well until next time then! sayonara! ps: wow! this review is long!
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Title: COOL
Reviewed By: Phoxy22 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 08:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so much! It is sooo col and I find it really fun to read. Do you think you could update soon PLEASE? I cant wait to see what happens next. Oh by the way did I forget to tell you that I LOVE YOUR STORY?
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Reviewed By: kmec On: April 16, 2004 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter was even better, I hope that you keep writing, it's like a story that starts out and you can't stop reading it!
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Reviewed By: crescentmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep going. who's the demon,I don't japanese spelling. this is a good story.
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Reviewed By: Mareana On: March 21, 2004 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this story its and I think that you should countinue on with the story. And I hope I get to read the rest of the story.
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Reviewed By: Mareana On: March 21, 2004 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this story its and I think that you should countinue on with the story. And I hope I get to read the rest of the story.
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Reviewed By: kmec On: March 20, 2004 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that what you are writing is good, i will look agian to see if you wrote chapter 2 soon, do't keep us wating to long
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